revelation - Pentapede Nation #107

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Dramatic reveal! Dun-dun-dun!

Pentapede Nation Page “revelation - Pentapede Nation #107” — Posted by G. Lehr, 2013-07-30 — Tags: ian allgood, logan samuelson, book 1 - escape — Metadata (YAML) — Transcript (TXT) — Permalink

(1) [LOGAN stands in the forest with the CLEANUP CREW CAPTAIN]

CAPTAIN - There are some still attacking in the forest, but we believe most never made it out of the building.

LOGAN - Stay on them captain. They're smarter than you'd expect. Send some of your drones to sweep the area, just in case they did escape.

(2)

CAPTAIN (leaving) - Yes, sir.

IAN (off-panel) - Logan?

(3)

IAN (entering) - What the hell are you doing here? Why are you commanding my team?

LOGAN - They're my team, Ian. I'm here to end your reign of incompetence.